At the rainbow bar, many people were talking, smoking and kissing. Axl met Stephanie in the bar. They loved each other very much. Suddenly, an woman came in the bar and hit Stephanie.
Rising action
Axl and Stephanie struggle for a gun because Stephanie wanted to killed the woman, but Axl didn't. Axl tried to stop Stephanie since Axl loved that woman before. He didn't want to hurt the woman. Stephanie calm down and Axl suggested to marry Stephanie. Stephanie was happy and forgot the things about the woman. Slash loved Stephanie, too. He knew that the woman made Stephanie sad. Therefore, he decided to kill the woman. Slash drove car with her over a cliff. He jumped out the car before the car crashed. He killed the woman!
Climax
Axl and Stephanie married in the church. Axl didn't find the ring! Slash gave him a ring. Then, they went to the wedding party. Axl knew that Stephanie still loved Slash, so he hated Slash very much. The guests enjoyed the party. Suddenly, the rain fell down. The guests were confused. Axl wanted to kill Slash in this chance. He took out the gun and shot to Slash. But he quaked and killed Stephanie carelessly.
Falling Action Axl was very upset after Stephanie dead. He needed some psyche assistance. The instructor helped him and Axl needed to take some medicines before slept.
Resolution
Axl still though of Stephanie's dead with the psyche assistance. He can't forgive himself and killed himself near Stephanie's grave.
1 comment:
Wow, what a cogently tragic story! You've reached the maximum number of deaths permitted in this story: three. But your masterful use of the exclamation mark made humor where sadness would usually lie. Keep up the good work.
Beware, however, that your use of "too" proposes and addition rather than speaks of excess.
10+9
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